To them, the fact that you are on the wrong side of the law is more important than the crimes you commit, no matter your motivation. Will you start to regret your actions, or double down and commit more heinous crimes? No matter your choice, your old hero friends in the Rangers will be out to stop your criminal rampage.
It's entirely text-based-without graphics or sound effects-and fueled by the vast, unstoppable power of your imagination.īe the telepathic villain you always wanted to be and embark on a career as a thief, mob boss, hero hunter, or anarchist in your own bespoke base. As of the new update, Fallen Hero: Retribution has gone adult.So you're a villain now? Let's see if you survive the experience.įallen Hero: Retribution is a 1.45-million word interactive superhero novel by Malin Rydén, where your choices guide the story. To join the adult readers group you click on the: That means that there will be a new post in the adult forum for feedback once I get ready to upload it (not long not, bugchecking). I will leave this post up with the old link for anybody who wants to play along but not go adult, but it will no longer be updated. This is the start of book two of Fallen Hero, called “Retribution”.I am putting this out here for some alpha continuity testing, because it’s a complicated labyrinth of stuff that gives me a headache and this way I can continue on pushing onwards. You can either have a randomized character or make a new character.This is an alpha level chapter, there is no grammar checking, spell checking and a lot of things are going to get filled out, changed and rewritten before we’re done.This is chapter one, where I try to wrap up the previous book, the nine months that have passed, and give you the opportunity to set your new villain stats and all the things that comes with it.If you haven’t played “Rebirth”, don’t bother looking, you won’t understand anything.
#Fallen hero retribution generator#
The character generator do NOT contain all character variations.There is no appearance set with the randomized one, I didn’t bother to add that since it doesn’t matter yet. Fallen hero retribution marshal steel generator# A lot of things won’t matter yet and haven’t been added. You can also make character combinations you could not get in book one, that is also not important. There are very few minor variables, they will be added in tbe beta, unless they are of vital importance to a particular chapter.The reason I am putting this up is to continuity test it.Please check for very long pages of text, I haven’t added many page breaks, so let me know if you find things that gets tedious.ĭon’t bother with grammar, spelling or awkward prose (pronoun errors are fine).Check for continuity issues, when people know things they shouldn’t, or ignore things they should have reacted to.If you find any abrupt transitions in the text, please let me know.This is the reason why I am putting this up, with the varibles it becomes hard to predict what the outcome will be at times. Any passages that makes you confused or sticks out as awkward?Īverage playthrough varies a lot, but seems to be around 8550 words long.Hunted down a lot of the things you pointed out (thank you), but there are still a few known issues I haven’t fixed: Can still make an unrealistic character.Lady Argent flirt/fight will be extended and less abrupt once I get in character.The stat sheet is not updated for book two.Some random new things apart from fixes and a new chapter: Can now choose to have won against Argent in the past and taken sample.
#Fallen hero retribution update#
Added content related to this and some prepwork for the next update (shrinktime!).Fallen hero retribution marshal steel update# More content, about a third of a chapter.Potential big bloody reveal, so BEWARE BACKGROUND SPOILERS! One truth will be out there.
Now hopefully the beginning relationship scenes with Ortega should work properly if friends.
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